A Letter to the Democrat Nominee-Elect, Sen. Obama

DO NOT GET TAKEN INTO THE TOWN-HALL PROPOSAL, please!! In the campaign speaking coming up, you WILL NOT (FACT #1) be speaking to a “town”. You WILL (FACT #2) be speaking to the people of the world, with some significance for every person near and remote. You WILL NOT (FACT #3) be speaking in a “hall”. You WILL (FACT #4) be speaking through the global conduits of many types, your words being picked up in every medium of communication everywhere.

Herewith, I am asking you to do something that will “evolve” political speech. It’s not an easy point to make. Bear with me.

Do not fall for the “folksy” trick of Sen. John McCain. That’s what he knows works best for him. You, Sir, will know better because you have a different intelligence, more youth, more in touch with world tendencies, more capable of learning, study, inquiry, and having a propensity for giving and taking instruction. I conclude that on the strength of your education and experience, you must stand against your opponent in a public communication and formal framework.

“TURN THE PAGE!” You said that and, I am sure, comprehended the full significance of that catchphrase.

Our ancestors have “turned the page” many times over the past four millions of years. The machinery of evolution is inexorably still in effect, a law that will never be repealed. (Check that: except perhaps through human blundering. H-m-m-m.) I wish to invoke the operation of that theory for this campaign and your presidency to follow. I mean, REALLY, REALLY turn that page. You must be up to it.

In these present times, there are more and more pressures to act under threats sensed as global, and immediate, like climate change and fossil fuels, hunger, poverty, overpopulation, the sinister changes in the nature of terroristic underground warfare. The list is very long.

People of the world will not be reached through a “town hall” of folksy “conversation”, a few sentences followed by a few sentences, skimming over the great number of issues. Presidential messages must be directed at the thousands of cultures and billions of people to be affected by the advocacy. Our president is a world leader. Messages must have a diplomatic style and a technically correct content. The special nomenclature for Presidential speaking dictates, mandates, requires an important distinction of forms and styles, requiring leaders who are carriers of the “social mutation” in the “genes” for public speaking at a higher level of consciousness. I am just saying that the next President should show qualifications to speak at a higher level of awareness, which should be apparent to us all. That carrier of the duties and skills that match the global job will be favored in this changing global environment, a change in political speech leaving behind the old model of politician in George Bush and John McCain. I sense that you, Sen. Obama, have the right stuff which will be revealed in your judgments and decisions about these campaign meetings.

Citizens must also turn the page in their attentiveness, lengthening their attention to a level of concentration that their experiences in this current society do not encourage. The citizen in any world democracy must have the opportunity and ability to receive longer, more technical speaking presentations. I am not talking about a magazine article standing on two legs. I am talking about a “communicator” with style, a higher level of diction. (Diction is a large trunk of mental and physical abilities.) The listeners’ attention must be controlled and pressed beyond a few sentences of “conversational” talk to a higher level of ability to concentrate on policies for future action in the world society.

For that reason, on those bases, we must have the presidential campaign “debates” at a higher level of structure and performance, involving a higher level of presentation and reception. “My friends” audiences are a thing of the past. “My friends” speakers are outmoded. The intent to speak down through that mode of address is not of a higher order of diction. The volume and reach is not there. The speaking amateurism of Bush and McCain can no longer be the model, can no longer be tolerated..

Audiences should be given what they should be expected to handle.

I would ask Barack Obama to lead the world with that new intellectual approach that can make some turn-the-page distinctions: it’s the formal principles of “discussion” and “debate” and “deliberation”. Your political communication is now PUBLIC and GLOBAL, DIPLOMATIC and TECHNICAL, STYLISH and FORCEFUL, HISTORICAL and FUTURISTIC. Conversation is not suitable! The TOWN HALL FORUM is not suitable. What should the new communication become? “One-across-cultures-to-many”. Not “one-on-one”.

I believe that there was some body wisdom operating in the body politic that nominated you, Barack Obama.

Here is the evolutionary context for my turning-the-page point. The global society gives the competitive advantage to that person with the ability to string together lengthy and complex explications of national and international policy in such a manner of speaking that nearly everyone gets to message clearly and enjoyably. That audience which survives will have had the advantage of articulate leaders who have risen to a higher concept of their communicative role. And citizen-audiences will complement their president with their abilities to concentrate being challenged and found capable. Chattting with an audience as you wander around a stage is a lower order of confrontation with the listeners and topic. The urgency of the problems demands more.

I see the wretched model of leadership we have had the past eight years. Unfortunately, a society that may be amusing itself to death and that has a poor record of electing sub-standard leaders has a long way to go to accept, understand and operate in a new communicative context that is equal to the challenges in the global context of threats to our survival. Amusement is fine, but it is the tail, not the dog.

The context for ideas for “turning pages”, to take you seriously, follows. It is certainly considerably more complex than John McCain’s understanding of “change”.

Turning pages goes back to the evolution of consciousness in human history on Earth. Certain variabilities in human development over millennia were selected by environmental pressures and proved to be advantageous for survival. Isn’t that true in our present global environment? If nature changes, human nature must change. Evolution is the mechanism. Those (people, nations) adapted to the old nature will probably not survive. Those (people, nations) adaptable by their nature will find the new environment no threat.

The hunter-gatherers developed a simple instrumental communication serving their tribal affairs, with no need of consciousness (as defined below).

In an advance toward, but falling short of consciousness, language and speech was necessary to cope with the increasing population and the complexity of larger societies wherein the voice of a leading spirit gave the rules and laws to a people in an extended social unit no longer tribal. Everything was done without consciousness, for after the chief’s death, his voice authorizing behavior would still bind together the population-at-large under stress to determine some course of action. The hallucinated voices of dead kings became gods maintaining that higher-power to authorize behavior. Even in early Greek times, the heroes were still closely tied to the commandments of the gods.

At the next turn of a page, there followed a higher-order ability of human beings to be self-directed by their own inner narratives of self-authorization. Consciousness was thus obtained. There was, of course, an overlap of those people proceeding with consciousness and those maintaining the mentality of god-speak. (The theory rests on the differential functioning of the two hemispheres of the brain.)

Presently, the number of worldwide threats to human survival creates more and more pressures to behave differently, to grow a new mentality to cope globally involving a world consciousness that surpasses the egoistic narrative. We are at a place where the self recedes into the background as global threats must be met, climate change, hunger, poverty, overpopulation, terrorism, and so on.

President-nominee Obama has to lead the world with a new intellectual focus that can make some turn-the-page distinctions: it is now “discussion” and “negotiation” and “debate” and “deliberation” and “argumentation” and “rhetoric” (finding the possible means of persuasion in any given case—a definition not commonly understood: “Oh, that’s just rhetoric!”).

Your presidential political communication is now PUBLIC and GLOBAL, DIPLOMATIC and TECHNICAL, STYLISH and FORCEFUL, HISTORICAL and FUTURISTIC. Conversation is not suitable! The TOWN HALL FORUM is not suitable. What should the new communication become? “One-across-cultures-to-many”. Not “one-on-one”.

You, Sen. Obama, as President, will stand on the threshold of a new regime to teach a new way of proceeding to a new set of policies. Start now by avoiding the traps set by the old fashion of communicating.

TURN THE PAGE!

The Nominees Debate, Propositions and Framework

For the nominee debates, the two parties must collaborate to frame the propositions.

(Please add some well phrased propositions for the debates between the nominees.)

Why am I doing this? Simple: I, and I am sure millions more, DEMAND that this procedure be used in this manner NOT to waste our time with what has passed for debate in the primary season. I (WE?) WANT QUALITY DIRECT CLASH ON THE ISSUES!!!

POLICY DEBATES

These debates will be limited to issues in public policy, health care, preservation or development of wilderness areas and other public lands, economy, Iraq War, global warming, energy, education, immigration, infrastructure, judicial appointments, NAFTA, United Nations issues, etc.

EXAMPLES

#1 - RESOLVED, that the U.S. Congressional health-care system (or, alternatively, the Medicare health-care program for the elderly) be extended to everyone living in the U.S who has paid a portion of their income into Social Security.

#2 - RESOLVED, that the 80% of U. S. military forces in Iraq be withdrawn from Iraq within six months after January 20th, 2009.

CONSTRUCTIVE ROUND OF ARGUMENTS

FOR: The constructive arguments of the first nominee must define the terms of the proposition, show the problems with the status quo and set up a case with the advantages and evidence in favor of the new plan stated in the proposition:

1. the health-care system of Congress
2. extended
3. everyone living in the U.S.
4. who has paid into the Social Security system

AGAINST: The constructive arguments by the second nominee must define the terms of the proposition and set up a case of disadvantages and evidence against the plan proposed and offer an alternative plan or support the status quo with some minor changes.

REBUTTAL ROUND OF ARGUMENTS

The nominees must clash directly on the points made in the constructive round. New arguments are generally not permitted in this phase of the debate. The debaters must stick to the arguments already on the table.

The first nominee rebuts the second.
The second nominee rebuts the first.

ADDITIONAL PROPOSITIONS (Your submissions?)

VALUES DEBATES

Resolved, that diplomatic talks with the “enemy” (state or beings) is better than not having discussions with such antagonists.

Resolved, that marriage between two gay people is a human right.

Resolved, that human rights begins at birth.

Besides public policy issues, there might be some programs debating value issues, gay marriage, the beginning of human life and the choice of abortion, separation of church and state, gun control, faith-based initiatives, religious displays on public lands, death penalty, and others. Values issues must be kept separate from public policy problems because the intermixing of the value and policy issues causes the strong, more personal involvement and emotional content of values argumentation to carry over into discussions of the more technical and intellectual content of problems of policy. The solution of health-care problems affects nearly everyone. The problems of gay marriage do not have that general consequence of health care.

It is very important to have a debate, which is a series of speeches. It is extremely important to have speeches of a certain length IN ORDER TO AVOID RUDE INTERRUPTIONS BY FAST-TALKING OBFUSCATORS OF THE ISSUE. ALL TALK SHOWS THRIVE ON THE LATTER CONFUSORS, BECLOUDORS WHOSE SOUND-BYTE TALK GOES FAST INTO BICKER-BICKER. Those who “moderate” such gibble-gabble must somehow think that that mess of talk without respectful listening is drama demanded by the medium of TV. Case in point: The Mclaughlin Group, worst offenders. They allow a reporter to string together only two or three sentences before the over-talking begins. The deliberative mind does not benefit. We are given “conversation”, which goes a very short while before the subject changes.

Reporters Are the Death of Political Debate. Why?

Political “debate”. The Democrat candidates, 4-16-2008. Moderaters: two television reporters, George Stephanopolis, Charlie Gibson. Why did that “debate” become a non-political bicker?

1. Headlines and by-lines are the major concerns of reporters. The first hour was all about the headlines, not the issues that are supposed to be the substance of policies for improving our society.

2. Reporters do not know what “debate” is. They intruded in the direct clash between the candidates, for direct clash is the main marker of any debate, direct clash, pros and cons, affirmative and negative, constructive and rebuttal, on the points at issue. IT CAN BE DONE.

3. The personalities and styles of the candidates that occasioned the bicker making the headlines will come out in their handling of the substantive points at issue as collateral information, and do not need the direct focus. Ah, yes. There are people who need that stuff of trivial pursuits which the reporters felt compelled to dwell on for so long at the beginning. It used to be that newspapers gauged their diction to the sixth grade level of readability. Is that “gossip” level to be the norm of substance and ideas?

4. The reporters turned what was supposed to be a “debate” into a press conference. That’s what is in their blood, what they do by habit. They know no other way. They do not know “debate”.

5. I do not blame them for doing what comes naturally to them. Then who is responsible for that programming? He or she does not know “debate”.

6. Who should be responsible for a “debate” between political opponents, debate that is truly debate? There are people in the colleges and universities who specialize in debate, just as there are specialists in biology, history, sociology, They know debate. They know how to moderate and deliver a meaningful debate. They have produced great leaders in society who have extensive knowledge about debate. They would not be the celebrity journalists that are now dominating the process, to the death of debate. A celebrity is not essential for the moderator role, but a good critic who is master of the criteria is mandatory.

7. SEE: National Communication Association. The experts are there.

WILL WE EVER LEARN!

Republican-Democrat Nominees Debate- The Framework

Forget the journalists as moderators! Let them remain the copper wire, not the electricity! Let’s have real debates between the two nominees for President and the two Vice-President running mates!

There are professional, academic debate specialists in the universities and secondary schools who will not interpose their own roles between the candidates and the issues. They know debate. They know what argumentation is. It is NOT what we have seen when managed by the TV and newspaper newsgatherers who are wannbe stars of their own shows. The questions they present to the candidates are ripped from the latest headline-news and regard the candidates personalities too much. The reporters do not know how to frame propositions that make good debates sharpen the issues that are most important to the debaters and the people.

It is very important to have a debate, which is a series of speeches. It is extremely important to have speeches of a certain length IN ORDER TO AVOID RUDE INTERRUPTIONS BY FAST-TALKING OBFUSCATORS OF THE ISSUE. ALL TALK SHOWS THRIVE ON THE LATTER CONFUSORS, BECLOUDORS WHOSE SOUND-BYTE TALK GOES FAST INTO BICKER-BICKER. Those who “moderate” such gibble-gabble must somehow think that that mess of talk without respectful listening is drama demanded by the medium of TV. Case in point: The Mclaughlin Group, worst offenders. They allow a reporter to string together only two or three sentences before the over-talking begins. The deliberative mind does not benefit. We are given “conversation”, which goes a very short while before the subject changes.

I propose this framework:

1. A moderator who is a professor in argumentation and a “successful” coach of a university debate team in national, regional and local, interscholastic events. The National Communication Association will provide the roster of potential moderators who work within the special entity of university debate programs. It would be an honor conferred on those academics.

2. Each party, Democrat and Republican, will work with the chosen debate moderator to frame propositions for each of the issues to be debated, health care, economy, Iraq War, global warming, energy, education, immigration, infrastructure, judicial appointments, social values such as abortion and gay marriage, separation of church and state, NAFTA, United Nations issues, and so on. Such an intense, directed focus on our national problems is required to solve them with the Presidential powers to propose legislation and to eliminate irrelevant and frivolous matters.

3. The issues for each debate will be limited, and the propositions will be announced in advance.

4. The nominees’ arguments for or against each proposition will be given within a time limit to be predetermined. Perhaps four or five minutes for each speech.

5. The nominees will declare their stance, for or against, the proposition. It may happen that both will speak for, or both against the stated proposition where the proposition is supported or not supported, but the differences will be in the details of analysis, evidence, reasoning, history, plan of attack.

6. Each nominee will give three speeches on one issue, a constructive, a rebuttal, and a reconstructive. If one nominee declares support for the proposition and the other declares against it, then the debate proceeds thus:

I.

a. Constructive: for. Five minutes.

b. Constructive: alternative constructive. Five minutes.

(One minute break. Or commercial break.)

II.

a. Rebuttal.Three minutes.

b. Rebuttal. Three minutes.

(One minute break. Or commercial break.)

III.

a. Reconstructive. Three or four minutes.

b. Reconstructive. Three or four minutes

END OF DEBATE

(24 -26 minutes per proposition)

7. Moderator has the gavel to rap at the end of the alotted time. He or she presents the nominees, explains the process, states the proposition, clarifies terms, and generally oversees the debate.

8. All audience reactions should be prohibited.

9. Nominees should stand for all presentations.

That is a rigorous course for the nominees to run. Shouldn’t they have the stamina? Good ptreparation for their press conferences in their incumbency. We should be able to determine some of their style of leadership.

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Ron Lubensky wrote this comment. I am putting it here in case you may have missed it.

I agree with your starting point. Having the media run the actual debate benefits the media more than the public. Professional moderation would provide rigour.

However, the debate protocol defends a binary proposition: defend option A or B, true or false, yes or no. Of course, we need to be able to distinguish between the candidates and their positions. Rather than push each towards extreme positions, I’d prefer a format that permits the expression of broader, more centrist, overlapping positions, but where the detail and subtleties of implementation for example may differentiate them. I’m less interested in rebuttal, as it is too often scripted and done poorly with misinformation and distortion. I’d rather see clear expressions of commitments and understanding of the policy landscape by the candidates. Leave it to the viewers to judge the merits of the proposals and the competence of the candidates. Finally, and most importantly, the debate format you promote still doesn’t bring people into the process, which I think is what is really required. The questions addressed by candidates should be the result of a deliberative process that harvests them from a microcosm of the population. And the process needs to be able to surprise the candidates–after all, we are looking to see how they react unscripted on their feet under the glare of the camera.

My response:

Let me clarify. When I say “a”, I meant to indicate that is one of the nominees and “b” is the other nominee, not a proposition.

In the short time between the constructive round and the rebuttal round–yes, “rebuttal” as a hard job of any respectable debater– , nothing can be “scripted” except in the sense that the speaker-nominee “a” has generally practiced his or her stump speech so much that you might say, in a way it is “scripted”; it is extemporized from a long campaign of practice. Same for the speaker-nominee “b”. We have just had the exhibition season.Now it’s on to the finals.
What will be good for us is that we will have a direct clash between opposing parties for the first time, focusing on a subject matter restricted to just a few crucial issues in each debate.

No more “my friends” conversation. This is high level discussion and debate at the highest level, two specialized terms in the nomenclature of the debate specialists. Not for amateurs or the “minor” league.

The audience participation you desire should be done with demographically selected, as pollsters do the job, focus-groups after the debates at a remove from the debate hall, same building or across the continent in the regions blue or red. These debates should be a media event, primarily. Actually it should be the people who bring themselves into the process in discussion groups in libraries or some such meeting hall throughout the nation. Or, what’s better, livingrooms filled with neighbors or friends or relatives gathered to watch and discuss each event. What a “hotbed” of democracy that would be!